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The planet is governed by two ruling tribes, the //EarthWalkers //and the //CloudRunners//. The leader of the vicious SharpClaw Tribe, known as General Scales, has kidnapped a prince and princess from each of the tribes. By doing this, he hopes to cause chaos throughout the planet as instead of the working together, the ruling tribes are too busy blaming each other! |
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-I tried to help but have been mortally wounded and remain deep inside a palace called //Warlock Mountain. // |
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+I tried to help but I have been mortally wounded and remain deep inside a palace called //Warlock Mountain. // |
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Please hurry, jump through the wormhole, It will bring you to Dinosaur Planet. Sabre, you must find Prince Tricky and Krystal, you must find Princess Kyte. When they are rescued, bring them to Warlock Mountain! |
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Sabre is a 20-year-old warrior from the Wolfen Tribe and is the son of Randorn the mighty Wizard King. |
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-He is an excellent swordsman, taught by his elder brother, When he was 13, a war took place on his home planet. His elder brother, sent into battle by his father, died on the battlefield. |
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+He is an excellent swordsman, taught by his elder brother. When he was 13, a war took place on his home planet. His elder brother, sent into battle by his father, died on the battlefield. |
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Randorn, overcome with grief, disappeared into the wilderness never to be seen again. |
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Whilst searching a densely wooded valley, Sabre came face to face with a female warrior called Krystal. She was from the tribe that had been at war with the Wolfens many years ago. It was they that had killed his brother. He drew his sword but was surprised when she called out his name! |
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-She told him a tale of a hidden temple, into which she and his father had ventured. They had discovered a way to communicate wither other races beyond their world, in the stars above and had spoken to strange creatures called Dinosaurs! |
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+She told him a tale of a hidden temple, into which she and his father had ventured. They had discovered a way to communicate with other races beyond their world, in the stars above, and had spoken to strange creatures called Dinosaurs! |
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The Dinosaurs had asked for help and Randorn took the task upon himself. Before leaving, he had asked Krystal to find his son, Sabre. |
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