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Last modified by Banjeoin on 2023/02/23 16:43

From version < 101.14 >

edited by Hugo Peters
on 2021/03/07 02:32

To version < 102.1 >

edited by Banjeoin
on 2023/02/23 16:40

Change comment: Added some missing captions for the storyboards in places where I could read them! "Trucking in/out" is a common storyboarding term, and is the type of camera movement the artist is describing in the panel drawings. "Tracking" is a different kind of camera movement.

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@@ -13,19 +13,19 @@
   "name": "SC 1",
   "img": [{
    "file": "SC1_0.png",
--  "title": "Action: Shows scale of characters to landscape"
++  "title": "Action: Shows scale of characters to landscape."
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_1.png",
--  "title": "Action: Cloudrunner flys towards Krystal + Kyte"
++  "title": "Action: Cloudrunner flys towards Krystal + Kyte."
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_2.png",
    "title": ""
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_3.png",
--  "title": "Action: Cloudrunner flys towards Krystal + Kyte"
++  "title": "Action: Cloudrunner flys towards Krystal + Kyte."
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_26.png",
--  "title": "Action: Cloudrunner is struck by laser"
++  "title": "Action: Cloudrunner is struck by lazer"
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_27.png",
    "title": ""
@@ -34,28 +34,28 @@
    "title": "Dialogue: Kyte: What is it?"
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_29.png",
--  "title": "Action: Spaceship shoots + misses Krystal, says look out. Cloudrunner leaves to ????? a few times. Dialogue: Krystal: Look out!"
++  "title": "Action: Spaceship shoots + misses. Krystal says look out. Cloudrunner weaves to avoid a few times. Dialogue: Krystal: Look out!"
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_30.png",
--  "title": "Action: Cloudrunner is hit by lazer + spirals out of the sky"
++  "title": "Action: Cloudrunner is hit by lazer + spirals out of the sky."
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_31.png",
--  "title": "Action: Spaceship continues firing lazers"
++  "title": "Action: Spaceship continues firing lazers."
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_32.png",
--  "title": "Action: Lazers shot around characters(?). Camera: Camera shake?"
++  "title": "Action: Lazers shot around K + K (NOTE: letters hard to discern, but matches the more handwriting in SC4). Camera: Camera shake?"
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_33.png",
--  "title": "Action: Cloudrunner falls from sky in front of Krystal + Kyte"
++  "title": "Action: Cloudrunner falls from sky in front of Krystal + Kyte."
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_34.png",
--  "title": "Action: Spaceship: Does U-Turn"
++  "title": "Action: Spaceship: Does U-turn."
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_35.png",
    "title": "Action: Downshot of 3 characters. Camera: Downshot"
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_36.png",
--  "title": "Tilted horizon line. Dialogue: Who did this. ??? Princess, you're safe. We were all worried."
++  "title": "Tilted horizon line. Dialogue: Who did this. Everything off-kilter. (NOTE: likely referring to the shot's tilted camera angle) Princess, you're safe. We were all worried."
   }, {
    "file": "SC1_37.png",
    "title": "Dialogue: Never mind me, what's happened in the fortress... Cloudrunner: General Scales + his army, but there's something else"
@@ -88,13 +88,13 @@
    "title": "Could kick her."
   }, {
    "file": "SC4_8.png",
--  "title": "Action: Queen Cloudrunner raises head. You coward Scales... ... will never give you what he's promised you."
++  "title": "Action: Queen Cloudrunner raises head. You coward Scales... ... will never give you what he's promised you. (NOTE: some dialogue out of frame) You're just a fool!"
   }, {
    "file": "SC4_9.png",
    "title": "Dialogue: I assure you Queen. Once we have the Spellstones I will rule Dinosaur Planet."
   }, {
    "file": "SC4_10.png",
--  "title": "You're just a fool."
++  "title": "You're just a fool. (NOTE: this is very likely a scanning error, including a stray part of SC4 Panel 8.)"
   }, {
    "file": "SC4_11.png",
    "title": "Dialogue: Who are they talking about Kyte? Kyte?"
@@ -112,10 +112,10 @@
    "title": ""
   }, {
    "file": "SC4_16.png",
--  "title": "Dialogue: And now, for the last time Where is the Spellstone."
++  "title": "Dialogue: And now, for the last time, where is the Spellstone."
   }, {
    "file": "SC4_17.png",
--  "title": "Action: Eye closes. Dialogue: You will never know. Camera: Rotates. You will never know.."
++  "title": "Action: Eye closes. Dialogue: You will never know. Camera: Rotates. You will never know."
   }, {
    "file": "SC4_18.png",
    "title": "Action: Kyte flys over courtyard. Dialogue: Kyte: NOOO!!!"
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
    "title": "Action: Robot hovers. Robot fires laser at Krystal. Dialogue: G.S.: Take them away!!!"
   }, {
    "file": "SC4_25.png",
--  "title": "Action: Krystal falls down unconcious."
++  "title": "Action: Krystal falls down unconscious."
   }]
  }, {
   "name": "SC 5",
@@ -157,10 +157,10 @@
   "name": "SC 8",
   "img": [{
    "file": "SC8_44.png",
--  "title": "Dialogue: I knew you'd come back for me. K:"
++  "title": "Dialogue: G: I knew you'd come back for me. K:"
   }, {
    "file": "SC8_45.png",
--  "title": "Action: Krystal questions guardian. Dialogue: But why didn't you just free yourself?"
++  "title": "Action: Krystal questions Guardian. Dialogue: But why didn't you just free yourself?"
   }, {
    "file": "SC8_46.png",
    "title": "Action: Speaks to Krystal.... Dialogue: I needed to know you could be trusted. If you didn't come back then you would never have found the Spellstone. Camera: Downshot of Guardian."
@@ -175,13 +175,13 @@
   "name": "SC 11",
   "img": [{
    "file": "SC11_49.png",
--  "title": "Action: Krystal enters Royal Chamber.. silhouetted"
++  "title": "Action: Krystal enters Royal Chamber. Silhouetted."
   }, {
    "file": "SC11_50.png",
    "title": "Action: Krystal walks closer to Kyte. Kyte jumps fwd. Dialogue: Kyte: Krystal, at last, I thought you might not make it!"
   }, {
    "file": "SC11_51.png",
--  "title": "Action: Kyte + Krystal have dialogue. Dialogue: What's happened, who was that Cloudrunner? ...Kyte: My uncle. This is all his fault. He was cast from the tribe many years ago for attempting to take control of the Fortress's ?mass solo with is...? He's helping them find the Spellstone that's hidden here."
++  "title": "Action: Kyte + Krystal have dialogue. Dialogue: What's happened, who was that Cloudrunner? ...Kyte: My uncle. This is all his fault. He was cast from the tribe many years ago for attempting to take control of the Fortress + has (sided?) with G.S. He's helping them find the Spellstone that's hidden here."
   }, {
    "file": "SC11_52.png",
    "title": "Dialogue: A Spellstone here, why didn't you tell me!!!!"
@@ -190,49 +190,49 @@
    "title": "Action: Kyte speaks to Krystal. Dialogue: I wasn't sure that the Guardian was still here, have you seen him?"
   }, {
    "file": "SC11_54.png",
--  "title": "Action: Krystal + Kyte speak to each other... Dialogue: So that's who he is. I just helped him escape, he told me to come here. Kyte: We've got a lot of work to do. My bts (brothers) were hidden when the attack started, we've got to find them. And the Sharpclaws have blasted (their) way into the treasure rooms. It seems like they're trying (...)"
++  "title": "Action: Krystal + Kyte speak to each other... Dialogue: So that's who he is. I just helped him escape, he told me to come here. Kyte: We've got a lot of work to do. My B+S's (NOTE: brothers and sisters) were hidden when the attack started, we've got to find them. And the Sharpclaws have blasted (their) way into the treasure rooms. It seems like they're trying (...)"
   }]
  }, {
   "name": "SC 12",
   "img": [{
    "file": "SC12_55.png",
--  "title": "Action: Camera tracks to next pos"
++  "title": "Action: Camera trucks to next pos"
   }, {
    "file": "SC12_56.png",
--  "title": "Action: Camera tracks into grate. Black, nothing to be seen."
++  "title": "Action: Camera trucks into grate. Black, nothing to be seen."
   }, {
    "file": "SC12_57.png",
    "title": "Action: G.S. + S.C. stand facing each other. Dialogue: Guard! Have you found the treasure rooms yet?"
   }, {
    "file": "SC12_58.png",
--  "title": "Action: G.S. gestures S.C. salutes soldier style at 'yes sir' Dialogue: G.S: Guards, have you found the treasure rooms yet?!!! SC: Yes sir! The troops have busted their way through with the help of the Cloudrunner sir!!!! Camera tracks in slowly"
++  "title": "Action: G.S. gestures. S.C. salutes soldier style at 'yes sir!' Dialogue: G.S: Guards, have you found the treasure rooms yet?!!! SC: Yes sir! The troops have blasted their way through with the help of the Cloudrunner sir!!!! Camera trucks in slowly"
   }, {
    "file": "SC12_59.png",
--  "title": "Action: GS Good. Start removing the treasure immediately. If that fool thinks he's going to keep the treasure"
++  "title": "Action: GS Good. Start removing the treasure. Immediately. If that fool thinks he's going to keep the treasure"
   }, {
    "file": "SC12_60.png",
--  "title": "Dialogue: GS ... for himself + take command of this Fortress, then he's crazier than I thought... Once he helps us get the Spellstone, we'll kill him!!! Camera tracks in quickly for end dialogue. Gestures with ?fear + hear?"
++  "title": "Dialogue: GS ...for himself + take command of this Fortress, then he's crazier than I thought... Once he helps us get the Spellstone, we'll kill him!!! Camera trucks in quickly for end dialogue. Face + Head"
   }, {
    "file": "SC12_61.png",
    "title": "Action: General Scales + SharpClaw laugh"
   }, {
    "file": "SC12_62.png",
--  "title": "Action: General Scales + SharpClaw turns + leave room."
++  "title": "Action: General Scales + SharpClaw turn + leave room."
   }, {
    "file": "SC12_63.png",
--  "title": "Action: Camera tracks quickly to dynamite. Camera zooms. Dialogue: Kyte: I think we're going to need that dynamite."
++  "title": "Action: Camera trucks quickly to dynamite. Camera zooms. Dialogue: Kyte: I think we're going to need that dynamite."
   }]
  }, {
   "name": "SC 13",
   "img": [{
    "file": "SC13_64.png",
--  "title": "Action: Krystal + Kyte watch as 2 shadowy figures emerge from the tunnel. Camera tracks into tunnel."
++  "title": "Action: Krystal + Kyte watch as 2 shadowy figures emerge from the tunnel. Camera trucks in to tunnel."
   }, {
    "file": "SC13_65.png",
--  "title": "Action: Scales + Evil uncle emerge from tunne. Dialogue: Kyte my dea. How nice to see you again. Camera tracks ?quickly to? G.S. + E.U. walk towards Krystal + Kyte"
++  "title": "Action: Scales + Evil Uncle emerge from tunnel. Dialogue: E: Kyte my dear. How nice to see you again. Camera trucks out to show G.S. + E.U. walking towards Krystal + Kyte."
   }, {
    "file": "SC13_66.png",
--  "title": "Cameras rotate around characters: Action: G.S + Evil Uncle walk towards Krystal + Kyte. Camera 1 Dialogue: (Kyte) I don't think the feeling is mutual!!! Camera 2: Uncle For 260 years I have been cast out of my tribe + finally the time has arrived (camera) for me to take control. Camera 3. Kyte: So it was your fault my mother died. Scales(?): Not really. It was an unfortunate accident, she (...?)"
++  "title": "Cameras rotate around characters: Action: G.S + Evil Uncle walk towards Krystal + Kyte. Camera 1 Dialogue: (Kyte) I don't think the feeling is mutual!!! Camera 2: Uncle For 260 years I have been cast out of my tribe + finally the time has arrived (camera) for me to take control. Camera 3. Kyte: So it was your fault my mother died!! Uncle: Not exactly. It was an unfortunate accident, she wouldn't tell us where to find the (SpellStone?)"
   }, {
    "file": "SC13_67.png",
    "title": "Action: Evil Uncle's head turns sharply. Dialogue: Do you really believe that? After 200 years of living in the wilderness..."
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
    "title": "Action: General Scales grabs Evil Uncle with hook by the throat. Dialogue: Even now you still can't take a stand. You owe the Cloudrunner nothing. Camera: Still. Evil Uncle is pulled up. Choking noise from Evil Uncle."
   }, {
    "file": "SC13_69.png",
--  "title": "Action: General Scales pushes Evil uncle away and disarms(?) E.U. falls back. Dialogue: Now! Take back what's rightfully yours!!!!! - Scratches"
++  "title": "Action: General Scales pushes Evil Uncle away in disgust. E.U. falls back. Dialogue: Now! Take back what's rightfully yours!!!!! Camera: (blank) Screeches (NOTE: arrow pointing to Evil Uncle hitting the floor)"
   }, {
    "file": "SC13_70.png",
    "title": "Action: Evil Uncle recovers from being flung"
@@ -250,16 +250,16 @@
   "name": "SC 14",
   "img": [{
    "file": "SC14_71.png",
--  "title": "Dialogue: General Scales: in background laughing."
++  "title": "Dialogue: General Scales: in background, laughing."
   }, {
    "file": "SC14_72.png",
    "title": "Action: Krystal looks up at Scales. Dialogue: General Scales: Go on Krystal. You can do it. Saves me the trouble."
   }, {
    "file": "SC14_73.png",
--  "title": "Action: Krystal straves back from Evil Uncle."
++  "title": "Action: Krystal stands back from Evil Uncle..."
   }, {
    "file": "SC14_74.png",
--  "title": "Action: Kyte flies over to Evil Uncle"
++  "title": "Action: Kyte flies over to Evil Uncle."
   }, {
    "file": "SC14_75.png",
    "title": "Action: General Scales gloats. Dialogue: You old fool, you really believed that I'd give you what you wanted. If the CloudRunners didn't want you all those years ago, what made you think I'd want you!!!"
@@ -268,22 +268,22 @@
    "title": "Action: Kyte's head moves close to Evil Uncle. Dialogue: I'm sorry Kyte. I made a mistake. (Kyte?:) Take this..."
   }, {
    "file": "SC14_77.png",
--  "title": "Action: Evil Uncle grabs dynamite from Kytes claws. Dialogue: Now get out of here fast. Fast as you can!!!"
++  "title": "Action: Evil Uncle grabs dynamite from Kyte's claws. Dialogue: Now get out of here as fast as you can!!! (NOTE: first "fast" is overwritten with "as")"
   }, {
    "file": "SC14_78.png",
    "title": "Action: Evil Uncle jumps up after Scales. Dialogue: Scales!!! I'm coming for you!!!"
   }, {
    "file": "SC14_79.png",
--  "title": "Action: Scales realises uncle's intention, mouth drops open."
++  "title": "Action: Scales realises uncle's intentions. Mouth drops open."
   }, {
    "file": "SC14_80.png",
    "title": "Action: General Scales runs away from Evil Uncle."
   }, {
    "file": "SC14_81.png",
--  "title": "Action: General Scales runs towards tunnel, Uncle flys on screen. Dialogue: After him!"
++  "title": "Action: General Scales runs towards tunnel... Uncle flys on screen after him! (NOTE: the arrow indicates that the "after him!" is a continuation of the action description.)"
   }, {
    "file": "SC14_82.png",
--  "title": "Action: Evil Scales + Uncle vanish into tunnel."
++  "title": "Action: Scales + Uncle vanish into tunnel."
   }, {
    "file": "SC14_83.png",
    "title": "Action: Explosion in tunnel."
@@ -307,19 +307,19 @@
   "name": "SC 18",
   "img": [{
    "file": "SC18_87.png",
--  "title": "Action: Scales laughs. Guardian hangs head, looks up when he speaks. Dialogue: Looks like I'm still alive Krystal. It's a pity that your favorite uncle isn't. Guardian: (scrapped): Look ups, Look out! Stop them!!!"
++  "title": "Action: Scales laughs. Guardian hangs head, looks up when he speaks. Dialogue: Looks like I'm still alive Krystal. It's a pity that your favourite uncle isn't. Guardian: (crossed out) Look up. I couldn't stop them!!!"
   }, {
    "file": "SC18_88.png",
--  "title": "Dialogue: I couldn't stop them!"
++  "title": "Dialogue: I couldn't stop them."
   }, {
    "file": "SC18_89.png",
--  "title": "Action: Anticipates turn left towards wind shaft(?) Dialogue: Seeing as I have the Guardian, you can't active it."
++  "title": "Action: Anticipates turn left towards wind shaft. Dialogue: Seeing as I have the Guardian, you can't active it."
   }, {
    "file": "SC18_90.png",
--  "title": "Action: Scales gestures for Guardian to be taken away. SharpClaws + Guardian walk first into tunnel. Dialogue: Take him away! Followed by Scales.!"
++  "title": "Action: Scales gestures for Guardian to be taken away. SharpClaws + Guardian walk first into tunnel (NOTE: line bridging this description) followed by Scales. Dialogue: Take him away!"
   }, {
    "file": "SC18_91.png",
--  "title": "Action: Camera tracks into tunnel entrance as characters disappear inside."
++  "title": "Action: Camera trucks into tunnel entrance as characters disappear inside."
   }]
  }])

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